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Cmon knaff
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Classification section uses 1s when they should all be 0 lol
Don't like the self inserts in the slightest
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This article was actual heat. Way better than ours lol. I agree with knaff. The ending really makes this article its best and really does a great job at descibing everything happening.
That ending link. ITS ALL LINKED TOGETHER. you have me theorizing about this! great execution and a good concept lead to a +1 from me.
I find it amazing that people would try to settle here, how they haven't gone insane is anyone's guess. That said, this article is a lil different from the last time I was on the wiki, it's really cool.
-Wanderheil
Thanks for the comments!
Indeed this one came out the gate rather unpolished.
I don't want to implement your crit fixes until after the winners are declared, as I feel the entry should be judged "as is" for how we submitted it! Great feedback and understandable no-votes.
Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks
The article was good, with neat imagery and unique concepts that feel refreshing — but the end tale is what has me now hoping this one wins the contest.
Something about the way you described the falling sky and the resulting hole was just really really well done. When I clicked the link at the end I got a big smile on my face too.
+1! Best of luck!
Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks
Best author of all time
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I appreciate the read!
When read in tandem with the Forest the radio comms make more sense. A treasure in the woods may be an inadvisable tool to use in the fields.
Good feedback to consider though. I feel it's always important to be pushed to write more memorable hooks!
Was hoping this could be something that would get you hooked into Limmy Archives, cant win em all though ;)
Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks
Some interesting images that remind me of Shadow of Chernobyl, however the rest of the article is rather forgettable. There are some odd format choices such as the footnote and use of ellipses, and this line
an old radio can be a priceless tool for life within the Forest
Despite the previous paragraph saying that radio comms are not advisable? Perhaps I'm just nitpicking.
Other than that the rest of the article suffers from being extremely mediocre in concept, that being scary monsters in an area that can slowly make you go crazy, and being a very bland read.
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in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Collabconknaff X Twahllii
I can't upvote in good faith till this gets another round of editing.
It doesn't bode well when you mispell quantum as quantam within the level classification table, the first thing that people read and the first thing that should be fixed in crit.
That aside, it's pretty interesting honestly. I feel like this could be a pretty nice example of a backrooms level with a little more polish.
I'm no voting on principle till this gets some more editing
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Andato a Pescare: The Lake Vessels
Is really any piece of modern media complete without a fishing minigame? Finally I can live out my Liminal fishing fantasies right here from Canada no less.
This was a fun article. I enjoyed the references to other recorded limspaces and it was a pleasant ride. Not my usual cup of tea but the effort and quality is here. +1!
Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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humor is subjective and i cant say this made me laugh so for now
no vote
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You wrote me into an entry. I can't really not give you a +1 
Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks
Thanks for the feedback
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the uh
Pretty solid worldbuilding, but it's left me wanting some more.
The setting is rather strong in how it sets a post-collapse zombie story dynamic among its population, and it's one of the rare cases where I want to hear more about the faction politicking. I want to get a good idea of how this place is organized, what is the culture in there, which are the ghettos and where're the untouchably rich — more human detail, if you will. It lends itself to a lot of exploration of the human condition without having to squeeze a stone.
From this mindset, I feel like the end result is somewhat disappointing. It's not bad by any means but it doesn't come close to what it could be. Although maybe the kind of worldbuilding that I want is far easier in tales than articles.
I'll be voting neutral on this one.
Echoing most of Knaff's thoughts, but the use of author avatars is just far too much for me. I have to appreciate the massive gall you guys had in trying that out — it's pretty fucking daring, especially for a contest.
The story is massively campy and a little hard to read at times, but I can't shake off my mind just how ballsy the entire thing is. If nothing else, it paints a very good picture about the authors.
I'm going to be downvoting this, but don't let that keep you guys down. There's plenty of potential here.
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Andato a Pescare: The Lake Vessels
Nice article.
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