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Love the concept mate, looks cool, and I'd love to see what you do with it.

Very cool! by AlwaysWanderingAlwaysWandering, 02 Mar 2024 18:31
oh no
r a t i fr a t i f 02 Mar 2024 18:13
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the images from discord are fucked. it's a wikidot thing.

oh no by r a t i fr a t i f, 02 Mar 2024 18:13
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Fungus ManFungus Man 29 Feb 2024 08:38
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Far too short.

-1 by Fungus ManFungus Man, 29 Feb 2024 08:38
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Fungus ManFungus Man 29 Feb 2024 08:29
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Adorable! They truly are big goobers. I'd love to have one as a pet haha.

+1 by Fungus ManFungus Man, 29 Feb 2024 08:29

Hey, Knaff here.
Thanks for reading!
This page has a few fundamental problems and pacing issues that I am aware of, which I hope to improve on my next projects as I continue my journey of becoming a better writer. I stepped out of my comfort zone and tried something a little different with this one and had a blast writing it — so I hope you had a good time reading it as well! Every page is a learning opportunity and I am generally happy with how this one turned out, flaws included.

Cheers, and love you all. Can't wait to see you again on the next article ;)


Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks

Heyooo by knaffladknafflad, 21 Feb 2024 20:42
PEcranePEcrane 10 Feb 2024 03:05
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Is this one similar to the one in CN?
http://liminal-archives-cn.wikidot.com/muyuan-limspace-system

by PEcranePEcrane, 10 Feb 2024 03:05

Good to know. Haven't seen PP in the draft channel, has it already been posted or is it currently getting some touch-ups by you?

Oh but of course. PP is already written. Just not crit.

Glad I could help! I wonder, are there any plans regarding the "Plastic Paradise" and the Infinitum Wonderers getting some articles about themselves specifically?

Ah yes. Thanks for the extra crit. Those were mistakes in editing.

Except number 4. It is Infinitum Wonderers. They wonder forever. They actually don't do much wandering!

This is a stellar article, glad that my critique was taken into consideration. Especially the driver getting a better description and the limspace classification getting an improvement in tone. Overall great article, conjures a very vivid and interesting image and definetly nails the tranquil feeling of going home after a long jorney.
There are a couple mild grammatical errors and a single term use i'm iffy about.

1. "the Rainy Refuge sits, hardly unchanging" means the polar opposite of what you are trying to say, it should either be "hardly changing" or just "unchanging".
2. "No matter No matter who waits", "No matter" reapeated on accident.
3. "the limspace possesses untold trillions of faint and fragile connections to other spaces throughout the universe." shouldn't it be Interspace instead of universe?
4. "the Infinitum Wonderers." unsure of wether or not it's intenional, but the correct spelling is "Wanderers"

I'm SandyBox354 by the way, if it wasn't obvious.

Rest Easy
knaffladknafflad 22 Jan 2024 20:37
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This is one of those rare limspaces that capture the gentle wonder of an undiscovered world. I would rest here for sure. Thanks for the page, I really like this one.


Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks

Rest Easy by knaffladknafflad, 22 Jan 2024 20:37
Crit
Nautilus98Nautilus98 22 Jan 2024 20:18
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Wonderful crit received from
Sandybox354, Kai4CKai4C, and knaffladknafflad

As always, feel free to give me complaints and such about the article.

Crit by Nautilus98Nautilus98, 22 Jan 2024 20:18
:)
r a t i fr a t i f 21 Jan 2024 07:30
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Main

:)

:) by r a t i fr a t i f, 21 Jan 2024 07:30
invilid_accessinvilid_access 14 Jan 2024 14:05
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seems interesting
bad news that I can't enter or post because of broken discord
looking forward to new pages (and translating them!)

by invilid_accessinvilid_access, 14 Jan 2024 14:05
PEcranePEcrane 13 Jan 2024 15:20
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Systemcon 2024

For a whole year…… That's a long time.

by PEcranePEcrane, 13 Jan 2024 15:20

Been a while since I posted an article… that should change soon.

Anyways, this is the introduction to one of Thalasso's villains, Hypocrite King.

Crit received from moist breadmoist bread, knaffladknafflad, BlueTangs RockBlueTangs Rock, and NebulaEclipse_NebulaEclipse_

As always, feel free to give me complaints and such about the article.

Behind the scenes??? by Nautilus98Nautilus98, 11 Jan 2024 19:16
Proof of crit by TomuuuTomuuu, 07 Jan 2024 06:41
a_ov_Pepe_160928.jpg

Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks

GREENSWEEP 2024 by knaffladknafflad, 07 Jan 2024 02:20

Blue team for the win 💪🐟

We're Back! by BlueTangs RockBlueTangs Rock, 07 Jan 2024 01:42
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