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Oh how I do detest a period, I would never use one, they slow things down and break up my thoughts into well-to-do little packets, and that is awful, truly awful, a thing that cannot happen in my tale…
I really liked this. It was a creative and refreshing style and the character was delightfully mad.
RIP the poor bird.
Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » There is Not Even Silence
Goodness, wikidot has a weird account system. What's this weird forum signature thi
Sorry if you couldn't see my item.
Hello, I need reviews for my first object:
Object 1 - "Almond Juice"
http://liminal-sandbox.wikidot.com/object-1/edit/true/t/1447614955/title/Object%201/tags/article%20object%20_awaiting
There is.
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » There is Not Even Silence
Special thanks to SecondtoInfinity
Nautilus98 and
NebulaEclipse_ for giving feedback on the draft.
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » The Valhalla Dancehall
Adding onto this because I reread this article, I think that this article has so much poetic purple fluff for something which really doesn't deserve it, and I don't think that the prose itself is good enough to justify itself. It just reads a little tedious and pretentious atm.
This tale has been in the works for a while now. Part two to the Scav's Redemption storyline. Anyways, I do hope people recognize the themes I used in this tale. I'll give a hint, motherhood is one of them!
Any critiques, comments, or complaints are welcome!
Crit by BioPolar and
Worm that Walks
WTF did I just see?
The images are composite pieces I made from scratch. A Bunch of photos put together to make a single unsettling photo. (Notice how the radio on the urban instance and Ghost are the same radio, cause it's the same fox.)
Translation: I'm being replaced! (send help immediately)
I liked it, but the AI-generated images are a little… off putting. Still good.
A pretty great entity article! A good mix of cute and biomechanical horror!
"banach! do the totes schizo funny thing you do again! its always so hilarious every time!!!"
"You mean the thing where I just namedrop a dogwhistle?"
"YEAH!! :D"
I hate RHYMES。
anyway good work
Ink Crit 1: https://discord.com/channels/792245826117304340/1134198222823375008/1134279461672595497
Ink Crit 2: https://discord.com/channels/792245826117304340/1134198222823375008/1136011770872475779
Fifth Crit: https://discord.com/channels/792245826117304340/1134198222823375008/1140409973231321109
Huge thanks for their input!
I love how evocative this article is. This realm is surreal and bewildering
Im a bit confused about the layout of the realm, however. Is the desert sat atop a shell that covers everything below it, keeping the megastructure free of sand?
great work，but kills translators
WHY SO MANY RHYMES
knaff你就在这里秀你的诗歌功底吧，反正翻译不是你翻（）
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