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Error012Error012 22 Sep 2023 06:30
in discussion Writing / Drafts » The Matrix Town

The Matrix Town Here!

I need criticism, I look for criticism.


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The Matrix Town by Error012Error012, 22 Sep 2023 06:30

Oh how I do detest a period, I would never use one, they slow things down and break up my thoughts into well-to-do little packets, and that is awful, truly awful, a thing that cannot happen in my tale…

I really liked this. It was a creative and refreshing style and the character was delightfully mad.
RIP the poor bird.

Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks

+1 by knaffladknafflad, 20 Sep 2023 20:14

Goodness, wikidot has a weird account system. What's this weird forum signature thi

by SecondtoInfinitySecondtoInfinity, 20 Sep 2023 01:29

Sorry if you couldn't see my item.

Special thanks to SecondtoInfinitySecondtoInfinity Nautilus98Nautilus98 and NebulaEclipse_NebulaEclipse_ for giving feedback on the draft.

by Worm that WalksWorm that Walks, 17 Sep 2023 02:03

Adding onto this because I reread this article, I think that this article has so much poetic purple fluff for something which really doesn't deserve it, and I don't think that the prose itself is good enough to justify itself. It just reads a little tedious and pretentious atm.

by Worm that WalksWorm that Walks, 12 Sep 2023 02:52
Crit evidence by PastacatPastacat, 09 Sep 2023 15:52

This tale has been in the works for a while now. Part two to the Scav's Redemption storyline. Anyways, I do hope people recognize the themes I used in this tale. I'll give a hint, motherhood is one of them!

Any critiques, comments, or complaints are welcome!
Crit by BioPolarBioPolar and Worm that WalksWorm that Walks

Crab mom! by Nautilus98Nautilus98, 04 Sep 2023 20:59
redgi110redgi110 04 Sep 2023 07:07
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Level Cement

WTF did I just see?

by redgi110redgi110, 04 Sep 2023 07:07
Re: Good
BioPolarBioPolar 29 Aug 2023 03:49
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Vulpids

The images are composite pieces I made from scratch. A Bunch of photos put together to make a single unsettling photo. (Notice how the radio on the urban instance and Ghost are the same radio, cause it's the same fox.)

Translation: I'm being replaced! (send help immediately)

Re: Good by BioPolarBioPolar, 29 Aug 2023 03:49
Egg2Egg2 29 Aug 2023 03:36
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Vulpids

I liked it, but the AI-generated images are a little… off putting. Still good.

Good by Egg2Egg2, 29 Aug 2023 03:36
Nautilus98Nautilus98 29 Aug 2023 03:33
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Vulpids

A pretty great entity article! A good mix of cute and biomechanical horror!

+1 by Nautilus98Nautilus98, 29 Aug 2023 03:33
Crit proof by BioPolarBioPolar, 29 Aug 2023 03:07

"banach! do the totes schizo funny thing you do again! its always so hilarious every time!!!"

"You mean the thing where I just namedrop a dogwhistle?"

"YEAH!! :D"

847425 joke format by ExceriumExcerium, 25 Aug 2023 05:29
invilid_accessinvilid_access 16 Aug 2023 13:02
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Cerulean Palace

I hate RHYMES。
anyway good work

+1 by invilid_accessinvilid_access, 16 Aug 2023 13:02
Crit Proof by Some Random UserSome Random User, 14 Aug 2023 18:00
MecheyeMecheye 13 Aug 2023 23:43
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Crumbling Desert

I love how evocative this article is. This realm is surreal and bewildering

Im a bit confused about the layout of the realm, however. Is the desert sat atop a shell that covers everything below it, keeping the megastructure free of sand?

by MecheyeMecheye, 13 Aug 2023 23:43

great work,but kills translators

+1 by invilid_accessinvilid_access, 13 Aug 2023 13:15
PEcranePEcrane 13 Aug 2023 13:14
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Attention Please


by PEcranePEcrane, 13 Aug 2023 13:14
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