Got an idea here but it doesn't have charm. It is an exposition about our character, Jennifer, and we gather a few traits about her such as how she views the world, maturity, her routine, and her hardiness. However, we do not have a reason to care about her nor her routine.
The routine is spruced up with some clever similes, metaphors, and the like. However, it lacks presence. Surely at this point in the routine, Jennifer could describe the aroma of her coffee each day much better than not at all. What is so great about the aroma that it pushes her to get up? Is it a brief escape from the toiling life through sunny pasture?
It may be intentionally robotic if you are intending on going the route of taking a cog out of a machine and spinning it down a hill. However, you must keep in mind, this is the introduction, the place where you need to hook your readers. Make us care about Jennifer, add intrigue, do something more than just the routine. Even if it is a normal/regular life, there is bound to be something unique about it that readers can latch onto. Every life is unique.
The only real source of conflict immediately apparent is the breakup with Leon, and that is a good chunk of the way through the section. Perhaps find a way to introduce it sooner. Maybe Jennifer wakes up and recognizes the room feels larger or that something has been missing for a while.