It feels a little generic and lacks a hook. This could use some expansion and a stronger identity.
Review some of your sentences, look at this:
"Throughout this level are a multitude of winding hallways and corridors which intersect quite frequently to create the level's confusing layout; throughout these corridors there are also many doors and doorways which lead into various rooms and chambers of Endless Vacation, which usually pertain to school classrooms, cafeterias, computer labs, and many more kinds of rooms commonly seen within most school buildings."
This is a single sentence that goes on and on and on — and personally I would say that it's a very dry delivery. Limfic has been around for a while now and people crave something with a little more substance than a list of rooms commonly found in a school. What are inside the rooms? How do they make you feel? Why are they relevant to mention? What theme can you develop further to make the reader engage with the article? Why is it called Endless Vacation?
Ultimately it's a little barebones and needs some more stuff in it to make it interesting. Keep it up!
