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Rewritten

Nautilus98 02 Jun 2023 00:02

This page is a rewrite of the old Ensembles that I made a while back. The old ones did not have any lore from The Valley of the Choir and were just… mediocre at best. So, I rewrote them.

Any feedback is appreciated!
Critters,
Egg2, totallyunison,The Dark Destroyer, and DrainedWell

Unison
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1113936219311714394/image.png?width=163&height=495
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1113936219580153947/image.png?width=299&height=495
Egg2
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1113936219831808090/image.png?width=687&height=495
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1113936220091859044/image.png?width=927&height=214

Avert
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1091052790840819773/image.png

No picture for Dark crit. Just trust me.

MF_TOMB 07 Jun 2023 11:16

Article Rating

Presentation	3/5	Easy to read. I have no problems with this format.
Interaction	3/5	It goes a little too far into the setting rather than the subject for my tastes. I mean, almost as much space is devoted to the history as the entity. Could easily be half as long and just as good.
Pritoria Index	3/5	Good analysis of strange animals, but it could be simpler. Has bloat. Good, thought out, well written bloat, but bloat that could be in another page nonetheless.
-	-	I enjoyed reading this. +1.

Last edited on 07 Jun 2023 11:18 by MF_TOMB Show more