Journey To The Houndstooth Pt 1

Presentation	5/5	Well that first image is like the coolest thing I've ever seen. The second is also good but the lanterns in the distance look a bit too shopped in, if they were dimmer or something I believe they would fit nicer. But wow that first image, I'm going to ask you on discord if I can use that for my campaigns. Honestly a bigger issue is that the first image is not placed higher in the article so it can be a nice 'hook.'
Interaction	4/5	Great prose, nice introduction, left me wanting more. Usually I'd mention the way paragraphs are divided in Presentation but it is very cleanly broken up that makes it easier to read.
Pritoria Index	5/5	This was my introduction to the Crimson System and I love it.
-	-	I really enjoyed reading this. +1. Also, you didn't put a rating thing at the top, is that intentional

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