Nadir Storytime / Discussion

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More names than stars

Nautilus98 10 Mar 2023 05:59

My third entry for the Tales contest(2023).
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This one is a bit weird. This is my attempt at introducing the limspace/system of Nadir which lies at the bottom of existence. Anything beneath it does not exist. This tale also introduces the "immortal"(too many names) character. It also brings up the fact that there are almost limitless numbers of limspaces and how many die without being discovered by the Archives. The tale is supposed to be based around eternity, life, and death.

Any critiques, comments, or complaints are welcome!
I received crit from NebulaEclipse_ and knafflad
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1083629778340413510/Nadircrit1.jpg?width=959&height=308
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1083629778604658748/Nadircrit2.jpg?width=674&height=461
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1083629778864709672/Nadircrit3.jpg?width=743&height=461
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1083629779141525544/Nadircrit4.jpg?width=949&height=461
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1083629779422552094/Nadircrit5.jpg?width=959&height=386

Emerardo 19 Mar 2023 00:44

the definition of perfection

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The Headless Deceiver Speaks Ever Louder

Nautilus98 19 Mar 2023 03:14

How did you forget both a period and a capitalization? Not a great introduction to the site…

Anyways, this is far from perfect but I am glad you like it. If you have any ideas about the space, feel free to message me as this is a newly started system open to worldbuilding changes.