The Form In The Fog / Discussion

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Based entirely on a true story... ;)

Nautilus98 10 Mar 2023 05:46

My second entry for the Tales contest(2023). I wanted to make a short tale about the effects on someone who received The Call but refused to answer. I wanted mystery and emotion but I don't know if that came through.

Any critiques, comments, or complaints are welcome!
Received crit from totallyunison and RatifTheRatGod!
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1083626754054312047/Fogcrit1.jpg?width=990&height=701
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1083626754448568360/Fogcrit2.jpg
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/971155650304413726/1083626754733768774/Fogcrit3.jpg?width=456&height=701

Last edited on 19 Mar 2023 18:32 by Nautilus98 Show more

Re: Based entirely on a true story... ;)

r a t i f 19 Mar 2023 18:15

:)

Great page. I'm happy to have contributed to its arrival on the site.

Re: Based entirely on a true story... ;)

Nautilus98 19 Mar 2023 18:32

Ah, so that is your wiki name. I would have never guessed. That is why I cited your crit using your discord name.

Anyways, thanks for the crit and enjoying the short story!