Voices Of The Dead / Discussion

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Rewrite

Nautilus98 06 Nov 2022 21:55

This is a rewrite of http://liminal-archives.wikidot.com/deleted:voices-of-the-dead

I rewrote it because it had some major issues and was pretty disliked. I also wanted to go in a different direction with it.

I received crit from Bloof in a crit4crit.

Any critique would be appreciated!

+1

basement12345 17 Nov 2022 08:26

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Re: +1

basement12345 05 Dec 2022 10:17

Alright but seriously, I really like the voices of the dead. Kind of sad this article didn't get more attention. I just enjoy their concept personally.

Re: +1

Nautilus98 05 Dec 2022 19:30

Oh but it did. A lot of negative attention. That is in the past because this is almost a completely different idea and tone. It also works well because it works better with my upcoming tale and some other things.

Anyways, thanks for reading!