Just going to copy paste the praise from my crit…
This is such a good story, starting off so fun, then so devastating, then intensely uplifting. You did an amazing job capturing the two sides of BSA: one side unfetteredly beautiful, the other horribly unsettling. There's also a lot of cool ideas in here, like the Finders which are really awesome. And the little things, like Juna changing her display name every few posts, which is pretty funny and cute.
When I wrote BSA, it wasn't even conceivable to me that anyone would want to write more for it, let alone anything like this. It's been a very long time since I've felt so moved by something. Thank you for writing this. It's a real gift.
It's a really good feeling when a writer you respect feels inspired by something you've written. Also, prose and character writing are a weak spot for me, so this tale develops on BSA in a way I never could. I hope you write more for LA because this tale adds a lot to the site in terms of character that was missing.
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