That is the common consensus. While I don't have a rework written, I do have the ideas I want to take out.
In Thalasso, there are giant cities that have sunken to the bottom of the oceans and some even further. I think it would be pretty interesting if one of the buildings that sank was a limspace like how Baseline has thresholds. The hospital would have been known to be "cursed" and thus was abandoned. Myths of twisted doctors would be spread around the children to discourage going out at night. Still, the children would go and play by the hospital that loomed over them.
When the cities began to crumble and sink, the hospital stood tall. So, people sought refuge inside. However, that was the hospital's goal all along for it has a mind of its own. The hospital would be a living building that has other organisms such as the twisted surgeons living inside and repairing endlessly. It would sink forever and loop around the many oceans as a wandering trap for the weary and injured crews—-waiting to be snatched into the steel jaws of the hospital.
Welp, that is my current idea for a rewrite. I don't need to do the time stuff because of the mountain "Timeless Descent" I am sure you know about that one! :)
Timeless Descent did the lost-in-time idea much better than mine and I think that I can reallocate my time stuff to other areas such as the entities or its origins.
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