Founders Valley Pt 1 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page Founders Valley Pt 1.

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JasonMakesManhattens 13 Apr 2022 18:28

The dynamic of these characters is fun but there are a lot of tensing issues and it should have been longer, the story ends just as it is about to begin. Maybe that will be less of an issue as more iterations of the story are posted but for now the tensing issues and abrupt brevity make me reluctant to endorse the quality otherwise on display.

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knafflad 14 Jul 2022 17:47

Part two is here ;D

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