This has basic proofreading errors, while I enjoyed the line "When close enough, they'll hop right into your face and will release a deafening scream that'll typically scare the living Christ out of the affected wanderer." the overall piece doesn't add up to being much more than a generic scary monster. There's a lot of telling us about Entity 14 but little actually showing of what is being described. Overall I found this to be lacking in most aspects, I'd scrap it and try writing a different idea next time or really rework this to have a lot more depth n substance to it.
Such is life in the Soviet Union