Well I know I can't please everybody thanks for being honest though
This is by far the worst level in the Backrooms,even worse then the old level 19
This is my first fucking level also yes it does suck ass honestly and I am not too proud of it
Kinda rancid vibes in here lads!
This work is obviously the result of someone trying con-fic for the first time. Let's not bully the author for trying, but rather build up their approach for next time. To grow people's skills and build up the community.
Let me give you a couple of tips, Walter!
- First, I really enjoy that you wrote a sister page for this entry, where you detail the native entity Four Arms as well. Ambitious and well done! More content is always great.
- As for the level itself, it's clocking in at just over 300 words which is rather brief for an article. A suggestion would be to expand your description here by going into greater detail. We can do this in many ways: consider the levels sights, smells, sounds. Tell us about where the water comes from, or where it goes afterwards if the pools are regulated with pumps and tunnels. Give us information about the fish that live the ponds, or perhaps something else like a cool mystery unravelled by reading signs all around the level. Anything goes! We just need this entry to have more substance!
- Another tip is to read, read, read! In Liminal Archives we have a different approach to article writing than in TS or Fandom. Possibly the best advice I can offer is for you to read more LA articles and try to replicate the things that you like the most from them. The article as it is right now is reminiscent of early TS pages which we have, in a lot of ways, grown out of and moved past. If you enjoy LA's style, study study study!
Otherwise, it's not a bad level. You have potential here that simply has to be unlocked by practice. And the best way to practice is to keep writing. Best of luck for the future and I hope to see more! Don't be afraid to pester people for critique on the discord to hash out problems before posting as well.
Cheers m8
Knafflad - Ohmeghon - Nostworks