The Alleyways / Discussion

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ham_fm 28 Oct 2021 17:33

I really like this, it’s engaging and personable without sacrificing feeling authentic to the thresholds, even if it reads in a more conversational or monologue-y tone. Nicely done. I really appreciate the characterization of our narrator, there’s a lot of little humanizing moments here that make this an engaging read.

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Such is life in the Soviet Union

knafflad 28 Oct 2021 23:38

Damn. It’s good.

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When Worm finds that certain spark it always makes an absolute banger of an entry. An engrossing read that didn’t over indulge and left just enough intrigue as it wraps up. A great addition to the thresholds.

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Worm that Walks 29 Oct 2021 02:05

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ImKak! 15 Nov 2021 23:02

Good writing bro, +1

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This doesn't become italics, thats cool

Rout50 31 Dec 2021 17:34

The best threshold I've ever read so far. Good job! +1

jononono 02 Feb 2022 16:24

This seems more like a limspace ngl.