I think the prose here is a bit weak, kinda clunky and difficult to parse. Despite the incredibly good images, the actual text of the article failed to convey a clear picture to me, particularly in the first section. Also, there's a lot of concepts here that feel a bit underdeveloped and wishy washy, like the mention of "hunts" which does not seem to be explained properly. I feel that the beginning section does a poor job introducing the world, except for the final paragraph (the one that begins with "Beasts, natural entities of the Crimson System"), which describes it in more concrete terms. The mystery and danger of the Glooms did not interest me much. The report felt a little shallow and over-the-top.
The Crimson Field
Isn't it "fields"?
Most often wanderers can see their breath in this Threshold.
Sometimes entire cars… buildings… neighborhoods are swallowed up by the Threshold
Isn't it a limspace, not a threshold?
