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Entity Classification

Description

It’s appearance is usually compared to that of a smiler, as it’s face is the only distinguishing aspect while it’s full physical appearance is unknown due to its nature to settle is dark shallow spaces, particularly large empty hallways, however unlike smilers it’s primary color seems to be red instead of the usual white, hence its name ‘red face’. Countless classified screenshots however suggest it may be a large, mechanical figure with some human aspects, more notes on the ‘biology’ section.

Behaviors

Typically, it crawls around long, dark places such as hallways or a wide room, seemingly scavenging for its prey, if spotted, red face will typically use various physiological and physical means to weaken the victim while staying hidden, such as reminiscing multiple rude remarks into the wanderers ears, or scratching at their faces when said wanderer is distracted, and when they are weakened enough, red face will lunge at them with no warning and start to rip their skin out, it is unknown what they do to the discarded body, however one wanderer reported seeing red face use the skin as a sort of suit but fails due to its abduct size and lanky structure. A note to give is that typically red face is seen showing discomfort or fear near any light source’s and especially fire source’s, such as flashlights, lighters, and matches.

Biology

as previously stated, due to its nature to hide in dark shallow places, it’s biology is known very little, however, Various researchers have proposed that it might have a human and mechanical nature due to its ominous noises and various classified photos of it seemingly having a human head with red hair and chest covered in tattered clothing, while the rest seems to be a cluster of wires and pipes that seems to mimic an animal-like structure, seemingly like a hound. Speaking of mimicking, it is reported that it can mimic various sounds, typically one of a howler or some maniacal laughter. It also discreets a certain type of oil including blood, possibly from its human side of things. It seems to be a singular entity.

Discovery

first documented when a wanderer on level 1 reported inhumane noises in a nearby small base followed by screams and then laughter, upon peering through the window he saw quote: “a smiler, but it was huge and all red!” At first it was regarded as myth, however, reports throughout the year have piled up for the existence of the creature to be verified.

Survival Guide

Do’s:

• Avoid dark places.
• Stay quiet and avoid it.
• bring a fire/light source near you (lighter or match)

Don’t’s:

• approach it willingly
• submit to its taunting
• try to attack/intimidate it

Recently, I discovered that one of my childhood experiences was inside of a liminal space. Everything was so peaceful, but it all went wrong in seconds. I've finally been able to muster the courage needed to tell people. I'm afraid you will not believe me.

When I was 5, My school went on a field trip. Do you remember going somewhere that was filled with inflatables beyond your wildest dreams?

I do. Very Clearly. My friends and I were having so much fun. This place is called Pump It Up. It was a staple of my childhood. There was an entry room, with a patterned carpet that looked like something you would see in the 80's. We would sit down and watch the introduction video, filled with rules and fun. We would go to the three rooms, and each one had three inflatables. We had 1 hour in each room.

The first two rooms were fine, but when I saw the third room, I felt like I'd been there before. I had this sinking feeling. I told one of the chaperones that I needed to use the restroom, and was able to get out of there.

One time, and one time only, did the door out of the third room lead to a fourth room. It was filled with inflatables, but not the kind that would be in a children's inflatables collection. I was in a completely different location.

I can't even begin to describe it.

It looked so surreal. The inflatables you'd only see in a lucid dream were all stored in that specific room. The room was always getting bigger, more and more inflatables added by the minute. Soon, the inflatables started to close in on me. I ran to the door, and tried to get out.

No matter how hard I tried to open it, the door wouldn't budge. I started to feel the latex creeping up on me, pushing my body closer and closer to the door. Suddenly, the door opened, and I tumbled out, falling face first onto the floor. I quickly got up, and tried to tell the chaperones about the fourth room, but they said I was crazy. I am sure it was not my imagination.